I just read a book with a wildly disappointing ending - I won't give name or author because I dont want to spoil it, but basically the protagonist's lover wound up screwing him over at the very end.
I would have no problem with this, if it was done properly...but the author apparently didn't understand "point of view". Several sections of the book were from the POV of the lover, and she was constantly thinking about how much she loved him and was loyal to him and stuff. If the betrayal was part of the scheme, her thoughts wouldn't be "Oh I can't wait to get back and see Jim. He's such a wonderful man and I love him." Her internal thoughts would be more like "I'm getting so sick of Jim. He's annoying, and I hate him, and I can't wait to fuck him over."
It just doesn't work, and if not for this one minor transgression the book would've been good, but you juust can't do that crap!
I would have no problem with this, if it was done properly...but the author apparently didn't understand "point of view". Several sections of the book were from the POV of the lover, and she was constantly thinking about how much she loved him and was loyal to him and stuff. If the betrayal was part of the scheme, her thoughts wouldn't be "Oh I can't wait to get back and see Jim. He's such a wonderful man and I love him." Her internal thoughts would be more like "I'm getting so sick of Jim. He's annoying, and I hate him, and I can't wait to fuck him over."
It just doesn't work, and if not for this one minor transgression the book would've been good, but you juust can't do that crap!
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